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WD Poetic Form Challenge: Byr a Thoddaid Winner

Here are the results of the Writer’s Digest Poetic Form Challenge for the Welsh 4-line poetic form, byr a thoddaid. As usual, many poems made the original cut before I was able to get it down to a Top 10 list and eventual winner.

Read all the byr a thoddaid poems here.

Here is the winner:

This Is Heaven, by James Von Hendy

The man we love most in the world
is dying. He sits, fingers curled
around the covers of an open book
to mark his place, and though

he nods asleep, each time he wakes
he reads with wonder what he takes
to be words he's not read before. Tonight
dim light pools on the floor

about his bare and swollen feet,
taut skin pale as a winding sheet.
He says there's nothing after death, so this
is heaven's realm, the breath-

less living room, its curtains drawn
against the night. "We're here, we're gone."
He shrugs, and smiles at us, son and wife.
"This life's a benison.

"No other heaven can compare."
It's true we'd rather not despair.
These long evenings, spanning years, are blessed,
and best, it staves our tears.

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Congratulations, James!

Here’s a complete look at my Top 10 list:

  1. This Is Heaven, by James Von Hendy
  2. Beware the Swallow Parade, by William Preston
  3. Artisanal Salt, by RJ Clarken
  4. Panning for Gold, by Taylor Graham
  5. The Gift of Age, by Nancy Posey
  6. Sun and Shadow, by Joslyn Chase
  7. Remembering Us, by Lisa L. Stead
  8. The Backyard, by Daniel Paicopulas
  9. Night in the Forest, by Sara McNulty
  10. Sunset, by Jane Shlensky

Congratulations to everyone in the Top 10! And to everyone who wrote a byr a thoddaid!

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Robert Lee Brewer is Senior Content Editor of the Writer’s Digest Writing Community, which means he maintains this blog, edits a couple Market Books (Poet’s Market and Writer’s Market), writes a poetry column for Writer’s Digest magazine, leads online education, speaks around the country on publishing and poetry, and a lot of other fun writing-related stuff.

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He loves learning new (to him) poetic forms and trying out new poetic challenges. He is also the author of Solving the World’s Problems.

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