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2013 April PAD Challenge: Day 28

Only three days left! Let's push to the summit.

For today's prompt, write a shadorma. For those new to the shadorma, it's a fun little 6-line poem that follows this syllable count: 3/5/3/3/7/5.

Here's my attempt at a shadorma:

"mornings after"

maybe she
won't need him again
maybe she
knows that he
is just a phantom haunting
her empty spaces

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