2023 February Flash Fiction Challenge: Day 9
Write a piece of flash fiction each day of February with the February Flash Fiction Challenge, led by editor Moriah Richard. Each day, receive a prompt, example story, and write your own. Today’s prompt is to write about a wish.
Wishes can be a source of natural tension for a story—will the protagonist get their wish fulfilled or not? What are the consequences of that outcome? For today’s prompt, write about a wish.
Remember: These prompts are just starting points; you have the freedom to go wherever your flash of inspiration takes you.
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Here’s my attempt at a story about a wish:
Impossible Wishes
The summer I turned 14, I watched my brother break his first horse.
She was a pinto, high-spirited. Everything offended her. I watched my brother guide her in the round pen, endlessly patient. At night, he’d spit into an empty Coors can and mutter curses he didn’t dare let Mama hear.
“I’ll get her,” he’d say, “Just watch me.”
Day after day, that filly stayed hot and wild. I didn’t know why, but I wished he’d never break her. That every day, my brother would turn her loose in the pasture, unsuccessful, and she’d kick up her heels in victory.
