2023 February Flash Fiction Challenge: Day 7
Write a piece of flash fiction each day of February with the February Flash Fiction Challenge, led by Managing Editor Moriah Richard. Each day, receive a prompt, example story, and write your own. Today’s prompt is to write about misremembering.
Sometimes, a false memory or the mixing of details can cause natural tension in a story. For today’s prompt, write about misremembering.
Remember: These prompts are just starting points; you have the freedom to go wherever your flash of inspiration takes you.
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Here’s my attempt at a story about misremembering:
The Details
“We went to the Finger Lakes that year,” she insisted, “and your father fell off the dock after too many beers.”
“That wasn’t me,” I said. “It was Emma.”
“No, no, it was you. That was the year you got bangs and took out your nose ring for good.”
That was the year of bad haircuts, but I’d been too busy trying to keep my marriage together to go to the Finger Lakes. But when I opened my mouth, my mother leaned into me, her perfume a swirl of vanilla and cinnamon.
“I always love our time together,” she whispered, like we were sharing a secret.
Across the room, Emma is trying to get little Midge to eat some mushy peas, the baby’s face a kaleidoscope of discarded food and her husband is playfully arguing with our father about football.
“You girls grew up too fast for me, just a blink of an eye,” Mom continued.
The house is loud, full, just like it was when we were kids. And maybe it’s the wine or the nostalgia, but I just kiss her head and let her misremember.
“I agree,” I told her.
