Your first impression of this machine is that whoever has been working on it has no idea what he’s doing.  Your second impression is he knows exactly what he’s doing -- even if you can’t comprehend it. by Matthew Wolfe
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Your first impression of this machine is that whoever has been working on it has no idea what he’s doing. Your second impression is he knows exactly what he’s doing -- even if you can’t comprehend it.

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The Hummer, which has suffered many mishaps, is riddled with odd bits of metal, things that seem recognizable and at the same time, entirely foreign. The grill is a chrome tube job from a 50’s era Ford truck -- only it’s up-side-down. Two of its headlights have been shaded green, giving the front end a pair of crossed eyes. A blue atomization pulse bar weighs down the hood. Air horns and chrome exhaust tubes have been mounted to the roof. Behind these is a mess of tubes, wires, antennas, and metal grills.

As the vehicle rolls to a stop, the whole thing sags and sighs -- white plumes of toxic vapors spew out from under the carriage of the beast.

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Two creatures sit in the cockpit, dimly lit by the lights of the dashboard. The dash and interior are cluttered with lights, switches, levers, and gauges. One of the creatures is actually seated backwards, the passenger seat having been turned a full 180. The figures are humanesque and male, but their profiles are not normal. Their noses are just a little too hooked, their eyes too far apart -- almost on the sides of their heads.

The driver’s side door creaks open, and the driver slowly, quietly steps out. He is short, slightly hunched, and dressed in worn, blue coveralls. He holds a cigarette firmly between his thin lips and walks to the rear of the Hummer where he reaches for a short length of rope to pull down a back gate fashioned from old, greasy lumber. The gate has a stolen Route 66 sign and a home-made nuclear energy poster near the top. At the bottom a Kentucky license plate is fixed to the wood -- a 20 year old plate, a plate that reads “TRY-666.” You just know these two aren’t from Kentucky -- or anywhere else for that matter.

With the gate down, Driver Dude peers into the belly of the truck to see the DroF-100/53 photon aerator tubes, the chrome tachyon plate, a Scisy 101 Accelerator Bulb, and a jumble of cables and hoses. And, as he walks up the wooden ramp, he sees the mean sneer of his tall comrade, who is sitting at a maze of controls, including a chrome 1950’s hot rod steering wheel.

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Driver Dude stares back with a sadistic smile and reaches for the short-snouted converter chamber, his weapon of choice in such delicate situations -- suburbia being what it is. The weapon is racked just inside the back area and attached to a long green tube coiled on a vertical capstan. The gun looks like a bazooka cut in half and welded to itself with a push-button thumb trigger on top of a hand grip. It has a plasma screen sight and two short, copper antennas. With the weapon firmly cradled in his left arm, Driver Dude takes one last drag on the cigarette and drops it on the wooden gate. He snuffs it out with a heavy (though very small) boot. He strides into the street, the green hose trailing behind him, spinning off the capstan, an umbilical cord, a line between creation and destruction.

He gives his partner a thumbs up.

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