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Point of View: Stories Are About PEOPLE

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Today's guest post is by Jim Adam. It is part of a series on
storytelling and The Strengths of the Potter Series. Check out Jim's
book, Motherless.

number of point of view characters in a story affects the reader’s view
of how focused that story is. POV also influences the reader’s
emotional connection to characters in the story.

Stories are about
, and the Potter series makes clear through its use of POV that
it is about Harry. Other characters, settings, hobbies, and events are
important to the story only when they are important to Harry.

stories require multiple POVs, but slush-pile fiction often switches
POV inappropriately.

[How to choose a point of view for your novel.]

Consider the following synopsis, where one
sentence represents a scene or chapter in a book, and the POV character
is the subject of the sentence:

  • Lisa discovers a dead body in the trunk of her car.
  • Lt. Manning takes over the investigation into the mysterious corpse.
  • George, Lisa’s estranged husband, has an argument with Lisa about letting strangers place dead bodies in her automobile.
  • A nameless individual sits in a dark room, planning a gruesome crime.
  • Dr. Trace performs an autopsy on the previously-mentioned corpse.
  • Chief of Police Henries gives Lt. Manning a dressing down over poorly prepared paperwork.
  • Timmy, who works at Squeaky-Clean Car Detailing, experiences emotional trauma as he cleans out the trunk of Lisa’s car.
  • Alexander is jogging at night when he is attacked, kidnapped, tortured, and finally killed.

synopsis above is make-believe, as well as incomplete, but it fairly
represents the outline of many novels sitting in slush piles around the
world. The switching POVs aren’t the problem, but they are a symptom of
the problem. The real problem is a failure to decide what story the
novel wants to tell.

If asked to boil the above synopsis down to a
single sentence, the best we could do would be, “It’s a story about
some murders that occur within a community.”

Unfortunately, that isn’t
a story summary, it’s a premise. Stories are about people.

The above
synopsis describes a story that’s about “everybody affected by the
murders.” Unfortunately, a story about “everybody” is most likely going
to wind up feeling either scattered and unfocused, or else abstract and

Nothing’s impossible, of course, and certainly writers
like Stephen King have achieved success with novels that feature a
large number of POV characters.

For most beginning writers, though,
trying to build a story around our synopsis would be disastrous.

result would lack focus, would lack literary purpose, would wear
readers out with all those POV changes, and would fail to make readers
care about key characters. As the villain from The Incredibles says,
“When everyone’s special, no one will be.”

Rowling wrote seven
books using Harry’s POV almost exclusively, and the few exceptions were
a result of necessity. The opening of Book 1, Philosopher’s Stone,
can’t be from Harry’s POV because he’s a year old. The opening of Book
4, Goblet of Fire, sets the stage for the rest of the book, and Frank
Bryce’s experiences in that first chapter directly affect Harry via his
mental connection with Voldemort. The opening of Book 6, Half-Blood
Prince, again sets the stage for the main plot line of that story. In
every case, these instances of POV switching serve a real purpose.

a single, dedicated POV character brings with it many benefits, and it
is certainly one of the strengths of the Potter series.

readers identify with a POV character, they’re liable to take his word
for things. If he feels he’s made a mistake, the reader will likely
agree (though they may decide that he’s being a bit hard on himself, if
he takes the mistake too personally). If he feels that he has acted
appropriately, few readers will question this, unless the POV character
has torched a puppy, or done something equally shocking and

In the movie The Matrix, for example, Neo is the
primary POV character. He and his associates are set up as the good
guys, and viewers come to identify with these characters. As a result,
when the good guys go into a building and murder a bunch of police
officers, we nod our heads and agree that this is the only possible
course of action.

According to Morpheus, anyone who disagrees with
the good guys is “so hopelessly inured” to a satanic, immoral way of
life that they don’t count, and we quietly accept his description of
the situation. Killing ordinary citizens is sometimes an unfortunate
necessity, but soon the good guys will overthrow the lawful government
and replace it with one more appealing to them. Then they can instruct
people in the Right Way, eliminate any who fail to get the message, and
the one true religion will prevail.

Because we identify with Neo and
his buddies, we see in them freedom fighters rather than terrorists.
This is the (rather frightening) power that POV has.

The Potter
series uses POV and reader identification masterfully. First, readers
learn to trust Harry. While he might at times be hard on himself, and
at times might be mistaken in his judgments, in his heart he values
honesty—including self-honesty. As a result, not only do we give him
the benefit of the doubt in everything he does, but his opinion of
others greatly influences our response to those people.

reveres Dumbledore and so readers revere him—even though we don’t
really see all that much of the headmaster. Harry dislikes Snape and
Malfoy, so we dislike them as well. (Their actions reinforce our
dislike, but also reinforce our trust in Harry’s judgment.) Harry
respects Hagrid but views Dobby and Moaning Myrtle as too odd to be
taken seriously, and this shapes our opinion of those characters.
Surely Dobby isn’t any weirder than Hagrid, but is merely weird in a
different way, yet we view Hagrid as an odd fellow worthy of respect,
while we see Dobby as a silly little blighter who happens to prove
useful now and then.

By carefully controlling POV, the Potter
series gains an almost hypnotic power over its readers, and it uses
this power gleefully to keep readers in its thrall. Luckily, the
series’ goal is to entertain, and most people get their soul back as
they exit the tent.

Next in series: Plot-Defining Disturbance

Photo credit: Krynowek Eine [el Eine]


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