Ae Freislighe: Poetic Form

I’ve covered so many poetic forms over the years, but still have somehow neglected the Irish forms. So let’s finish out May with the ae freislighe!

Ae Freislighe Poems

I think part of the reason I’ve avoided Irish forms is that the rhymes can be so intense, and that’s definitely the case with the ae freislighe. Here are the guidelines:

  • Quatrain stanzas (4-line stanzas)
  • 7 syllables per line
  • Lines 1 and 3 rhyme together, but they rhyme as three syllables (xxa)
  • Lines 2 and 4 rhyme together as two syllables (xb)
  • The final syllable, word, or line of the entire poem should be the same as the entire poem begins (the poetic term for this is dunadh)
  • Poem can be as concise as one stanza and scale out as far as a poet wishes to push it

Note: One strategy that helped me get started was to consider two- and three-syllable words before composing the poem.

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Here’s my attempt at an Ae Freislighe Poem:

Tennessee, by Robert Lee Brewer

Do you recall Tennessee
& all that late night kissing,
or is it a memory
once yours that’s now gone missing?

Perhaps there’s some video
for both of us to review
& retire to Ohio
with vows that we will renew.

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8 thoughts on “Ae Freislighe: Poetic Form

  1. AvatarLacharmoure

    OVER TIME

    Age has come calling humbly
    It teaches and I listen,
    My temple is crumbling
    Still supported by wisdom.

    Scars mark my memories
    Mapping out my journey,
    Full of friends and enemies,
    Full of joy and worry.

    My focus is on the horizon
    Eager to see what awaits,
    My consciousness is rising
    The closer I get to the pearly gates.

    Ready for whatever,
    Fueled by past glory,
    Thankful for each endeavor.
    That has made up my story.

  2. AvatarTegan

    Each morning I awaken,
    feeling ready to transform.
    Though my soul has been shaken,
    I am choosing to reform.

    Sometimes pain is hard to mend.
    I have to let the past be.
    I accept love that wont bend.
    I choose to let my heart see.

  3. AvatarEileen S

    I gave it a shot. Could only do one stanza. Maybe I’ll play with it another time.

    Past Wounds by Eileen Sateriale

    End of the class reunion
    will it be well attended?
    Or will it be disunion
    with no bad feelings mended?

  4. Avatartaylor graham

    ONE STORY UP

    There’s an iron Pegasus
    on the balcony rusting –
    its pinions tremulous,
    for inspiration trusting.

    A child – unlike Daedalus,
    practical in all weathers –
    lifts his eyes emulous
    believing in flight, feathers.

  5. Avatartaylor graham

    FREE THE GIFT

    Spirit above Somerset –
    a bird so high and regal.
    You speak of an amulet,
    wing feather of the eagle,

    token of your heritage.
    Unbound flight without limit,
    I’d free it to pilgrimage –
    nature’s unfettered spirit.

  6. Avatargrcran

    wow, Robert, i really really like your poem… the rhyming is wonderful imo… and being of very Irish descent, i am heartily glad you brought this one up here for us…

    btw, for those like me who are auditory-bent, the pronunciation of Ae Freislighe is (ay fresh-lee) (this info from bookloaf (?))

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