Your Story #76: Winners!

YS65Prompt: Write the opening sentence (just one sentence), of 25 words or fewer, to a story based on the photo to the left.You can be funny, poignant, witty, etc.; it is, after all, your story.

Thanks to everyone who entered and/or voted in WD’s Your Story #76! Here are the results. The top 10 winners are as follows:

1. If Trevor had glanced back, he might have noticed the now-empty canoe trailing his or glimpsed the hunter re-emerging to aim a second arrow.

2. Paralyzed with fear, Cole didn’t even have to look over his shoulder to know the kayak that’d been following him for miles was empty.

3. I hated paddling behind Matt, his shallow strokes like rhythmic reminders of how weak we had both become since the accident.

4. She awoke to her wrists and ankles bound by twine, and the man paddling the kayak attached to hers was most definitely not her husband.

5. Rowing with paddles whilst rowing about money, I couldn’t believe I had agreed to this honeymoon: far too much canoeing and not enough canoodling.

6. Looks of horror appeared on the faces of each jury member as the camera rolled and my red kayak got closer and closer.

7. As he approached the waterfall, he remembered how his wife, following behind, had insisted he pay his life insurance premium prior to their vacation.

8. It wasn’t like Ray to go quiet on us, but we honestly didn’t think anything was up til we saw his empty boat.

9. Three times I’d shot him, and three times he’d waltzed back into my life, treating our relationship like a scenic paddle down a nameless river.

10. They were straight out of a travel magazine, the beautiful woman in the kayak and the man who was going to drown her.

 

 

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87 thoughts on “Your Story #76: Winners!

  1. abuelitaos

    I enjoyed many but “a” is my choice since I can relate to the dreaming and feeling like I am in that dream at an older age. I think many people feel this way.

  2. littlealex

    May I ask who votes on the sentences that make it to be voted on by us the readers? I only ask because, there
    were some interesting and intriguing entries, but I feel that my entries were also very good. Just curious, no
    put down to any of those entered.

  3. Riverdale Stomp

    When will the next contest be held? I don’t see one for the month of August, and it’s now Sept 1st. Is there a way to get a notification when details of a new contest are released? (This is my first day as a member on this site)

    1. Baihley Grandison Post author

      Hi there! The next contest will be posted tomorrow, so check back then 🙂 Unfortunately there’s no way to get notified when a new contest is posted, but we generally always have at least one going. Hope that helps!

      -Baihley

  4. Indahmirasaputri

    I’m still not sure with the prompt, so it means we only make one sentence, 25 words? not followed with the long story? I really need an enlightened.

    1. Baihley Grandison Post author

      Yes, that’s correct. It’s just one sentence, 25 words long maximum. We run two types of contests on this page: a 1-sentence contest, and a short-story contest. We generally alternate between the two. Contest #76 is a one-sentence contest. Hope this helps clarify!

  5. mpjreardon

    I was surprised by now enjoyable this picture-inspired first sentence contest was. First time submitting in this format, and I loved it! Thank you!

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