And the Winner Is …

When Inis Clubs, 40, submitted Curtain of Iron to the ASA/WD screenplay competition, she never expected her debut script to take the grand prize.

Clubs says she spent three years trying to get her winning script down on paper. She wrote the bulk of her screenplay during the early morning hours on weekends. During the week, she kept a notepad around to jot down thoughts and ideas.

“The very kernel of Curtain—my half-sister getting trapped in East Germany—is a true story. I used some stories I heard growing up, such as stealing food after the war to survive. But 99.9 percent of the script is pure fiction.”

Although Clubs has dabbled in writing novels and short fiction, she has always been drawn to stories that are produced visually. That”s why she first started writing a screenplay—even though she didn”t know how to format one. So, she studied books such as Lew Hunter”s Screenplay 434 and online guides like Wordplay (www.wordplayer.com).

“Though there were many, many rewrites, I saw the first scene in my mind early on. The ending, too, played in my head before I [had] even started writing.”

Are you the next WINNER?
The deadline for the 2004 International Screenplay Competition is Oct. 15. Entry fees are $40 (per script) for ASA members and $50 for nonmembers. The grand-prize winner receives $5,000 cash and a trip to the 2004 ASA International Screenplay Conference. Visit www.goasa.com for script formatting guidelines and additional information. For other questions, e-mail competitions@fwpubs.com.

Clubs, who lives in Colorado Springs, Colo., started her writing career in TV promotions. There she wrote tight promotional spots packed with high-density visuals. These spots encouraged viewers to watch the station”s newscast.

“It”s pretty good training for screenplays. The conundrum was that I loved the creativity of the job but was too tired at the end of the day to work on my script.”

The breaking point came with the 1999 shooting at Columbine high school. After the incident, Clubs had to take “good video” from this tragedy and promote the news. She started writing Curtain during her free time as therapy. Finally, after working in the TV business for seven years, she switched careers and took a government job in public relations. But she continued to work on her original screenplay.

“Most of Curtain was written before I learned about proper formatting, so I rewrote. Then I learned the importance of structure and rewrote again. Next came a lesson on perspective and yes, rewrote again. Though doing it this way the first time drilled the basics into my head, I wouldn”t recommend it to others.”

After a three-year career in public relations, Clubs quit her job to write full time and market Curtain. She is also beginning to learn more about the screenwriting business. She has found that period drama pieces, like Curtain, are hard to market. Therefore, her next script about teenage rebellion, which she is writing now, is targeted toward a more commercial audience.

Scriptwriting software and screenwriters conferences are excellent tools to help a writer, Clubs says. She also offers this final advice for beginning screenwriters: “Keep at it. There [are] a lot of stories to tell and I for one would like to see them.”

The Winners and Their Work
Grand-Prize Winner
Curtain of Iron
by Inis Clubs, Colorado Springs, Colo.
Logline: An action story about a gutsy woman determined to get her young family out of East Germany as a spurned colonel blocks her 6-year-old daughter”s way out, triggering ingenious and adventurous escape attempts. Inspired by a true story.

First Place
Jayne Foole
by David A. Lipton/David Sanger, Studio City, Calif.
Logline: Jane Bold, born in poverty during the reign of King Henry VIII, rises to prominence as the first female fool in England just as her lifelong patron, Queen Mary, becomes England”s first female monarch. Jane must balance her ambition against her desire for love and, ultimately, against her very conscience as she struggles to stay true to her station in the face of the queen”s mounting atrocities.

Second Place
Death Watch
by Marlo Brawer, North Hollywood, Calif.
Logline: When wrongly convicted murderer Ray Gamble survives his own execution, he has to find a way to clear his name, only to discover the evidence from his case is about to be destroyed. He must convince his family he”s still alive, race against the clock to reach the evidence that can exonerate him, fight off the guards chasing him, and stop a serial killer who escaped with him from killing again.

Third Place
Middle America
by Stuart Fink, New York
Logline: A box of rain, solving for X and a decade of suburban sprawl provide the backdrop for this unusual love story between Most Likely to Succeed and The Weird Girl in the Corner. A tragi-comic tale told over two dizzying nights, with 10 very long years between them.

Fourth Place
Safe Harbor
by Susan DeMasi, Greenlawn, N.Y.
Logline: Hallie Mayer is a brilliant but neurotic biologist forced to confront her phobias when her research takes her to a remote island off the Maine coast. After she falls in love with a local pilot, he is presumed dead in a plane accident at sea, where Hallie must face her greatest fears during the search and rescue mission.

Fifth Place
Birds and Bees
by Suzanne Stavinoha, Austin, Texas
Logline: Twenty years after a rare bacteria wipes out the male race, women rule and “sexbots” satisfy. The governing alliance claims continuous efforts to bring men back, but their lies are exposed when Eva meets Adam.

This article appeared in the September 2003 issue of Writer”s Digest.

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