WD Poetic Form Challenge: Madrigal Winner

I’m sorry for taking so long to share the winner of the madrigal challenge. I’ve known for a week or two now, but you know what they say about good things coming to those who wait, right? If you don’t, trust me on this one.

Thank you to everyone who submitted a madrigal! They were really fun to read, and I found myself constantly caught up in their musical nature.

My initial short list included 22 poems, but I’m always stuck having to pick one winner. This time around, that winner is Bruce Niedt for his poem “Senior Discount,” which won me over with its humor.

Here’s the winning Madrigal:

Senior Discount, by Bruce Niedt

Apparently I’ve reached a certain age
where I’m forgiven at least ten percent.
I wonder how and when my youth was spent.

The movies, the museum and the stage
all offer handsome discounts for this gent.
Apparently I’ve reached a certain age
where I’m forgiven at least ten percent.

Nobody checks ID, they simply gauge
me by my face and how my spine is bent.
Free coffee doesn’t ease my discontent.
Apparently I’ve reached a certain age
where I’m forgiven at least ten percent.
I wonder how and when my youth was spent.

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Here is the Top 10 list:

  1. “Senior Discount,” by Bruce Niedt
  2. “A Tree in an English Garden,” by William Preston
  3. “Christina’s World,” by RJ Clarken
  4. “What She Needs,” by Taylor Graham
  5. “A Conversation with Nana,” by Nancy Posey
  6. “Windthrift,” by Jane Shlensky
  7. “The Unneeded Weed,” by Susan Schoeffield
  8. “Passion Play,” by James Von Hendy
  9. “Midsummer Night,” by Daniel Ari
  10. “Barbecue,” by Andrew Kreider

Congratulations to Bruce and everyone in the Top 10! And thank you to everyone who took the time to participate and comment on each others’ poems.

The next WD Poetic Form Challenge is already in motion for the terzanelle. Click here for the guidelines and to participate.

Also, be sure to read through the 450+ comments from the madrigal challenge. Click to continue.

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roberttwitterimageRobert Lee Brewer is Senior Content Editor of the Writer’s Digest Writing Community and author of the poetry collection, Solving the World’s Problems (Press 53). He edits Poet’s Market, Writer’s Market, and Guide to Self-Publishing, in addition to writing a free weekly WritersMarket.com newsletter and poetry column for Writer’s Digest magazine.

He loves hosting, reading, and judging these challenges.

Follow him on Twitter @robertleebrewer.

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10 thoughts on “WD Poetic Form Challenge: Madrigal Winner

  1. Jane Shlensky

    Great poem, Bruce! Having acquired Senior status myself, I appreciate the humor and the reality of your lines. It’s great to see such good friends on that top ten list too. Thanks,, Robert, for making poeming FUN and challenging.

  2. Susan Schoeffield

    Congratulations on winning the Madrigal challenge, Bruce! Well deserved. Congrats to everyone in the Top Ten. I’m honored to be listed with so many talented poets. A hearty round of applause goes out to everyone who participated in this fun challenge.

  3. PressOn

    Please accept my congratulations, Bruce. Having reached that “certain age” myself, I identified as well as laughed. Congratulations to everybody else too, and thanks, Robert, for a barrel of fun.

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