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    2012 November PAD Chapbook Challenge: Results

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    Wow! So everyone brought their A-game for this chapbook challenge. Previous challenges have provided plenty of quality manuscripts, but this year was just insanely crowded with talent–some written by familiar names, others by newbies who followed quietly at home (or on their personal blogs).

    At the end of the day, I really couldn’t make a bad decision.

    2012 November PAD Chapbook Champion

    But I did have to make a decision, and I take my decision-making process very seriously. I’m proud to introduce the 2012 November PAD Chapbook Challenge Champion is Kelli Simpson for her Eccentricities chapbook. While this manuscript was filled with great poems, here is one I especially liked:

    Just Friends, by Kelli Simpson

    I have a fragment
    of full moon
    on a chain
    and a breathless
    beatitude
    stained
    berry black
    on the small of my back -

    otherwise, I’d just forget you.

    I have a snippet
    of verse
    in my shoe
    and a bottle tree
    ready to bloom
    between your house and mine.

    It straddles the property line

    where you end
    and I begin -

    just friends.

    *****

    I was also rather fond of this one:

    Pinwheel Dress, by Kelli Simpson

    I was a pigtailed girl
    in a pinwheel dress
    when Mama met a man
    with thigh-high hands
    and problems.

    There are things you don’t talk about.

    When I’d balance ballet
    across the cattle guard,
    he’d peel me like an orange
    with his eyes and suck hard
    at my segments.

    There are things you don’t say aloud.

    And I felt so dirty
    in my pinwheel dress -
    with downcast eyes,
    I ran
    like I could outrun the mess of me.

    There are things I still dream about.

    *****

    I think what really caught my attention with Kelli’s manuscript is her ability to use sound very effectively while still delivering meaning. At times, her poems are almost sing-songy without getting abstract. It sounds like a simple feat, but it’s not. This manuscript is really pure poetry.

    2012 November PAD Chapbook Challenge Runner Up

    This year, I’ve selected a runner-up, who is David Yockel, Jr. for his manuscript Echolocation.

    There was so much to love in David’s chapbook, including this gem of a poem:

    Ode to Robert Bly, by David Yockel, Jr.

    When he’s gone, words will lose a bit of their honey.
    There will be one less arm reaching out to the world.

    The morning will write fewer poems and our shadows
    Will eat the light around our bodies. Old men in black

    Coats will erupt like snow-covered fields of volcanic ash.
    When he’s gone, there will be no one left to talk to donkeys.

    We will be deaf to the sound of love in running water.
    Late-night drives in winter will lose their meaning.

    We’ll keep hanging around heaven like houseflies
    Trapped by prayers and screened-in proches.

    *****

    Or how about this one:

    Bozo Love, by David Yockel, Jr.

    I’m afraid of rubber noses.
    Big red plastic shoes.
    Grotesque white faces
    and losing my letters from you.

    I’m scared to death of roses
    Greeting cards, the blues.
    Picture frames and places
    where trees block the better views.

    *****

    I think what really drew me into his chapbook was his playfulness with form and sound paired up with a leaping sort of poetry, which isn’t too surprising to find from a poet writing an ode to Robert Bly, author of the book Leaping Poetry.

    2012 November PAD Chapbook Challenge Honorable Mentions

    The field was so crowded with greatness that it was really hard to even settle on a winner, but I did–and then, hard task number 2 was to decide on a runner up and honorable mentions. These are all wonderful chapbooks.

    1. Indexing: What Can Stay, by Meghan Tutolo
    2. Fire Ritual, by Richard Fenwick
    3. The Syzygy of Love, by Laurie Kolp
    4. Holding the Bowl of the Heart, by Elizabeth Weaver-Kreider
    5. Topography, by Melissa Cumber

    Congratulations to Kelli, David, Meghan, Richard, Laurie, Elizabeth, Melissa, and everyone who participated and have new poems and chapbook manuscripts to refine! It was another excellent challenge, and I’m so thankful to be in a position to read everything.

    It’s interesting to see so many unique poems that have similar titles and points of origin. It’s like seeing a familiar face that is not the familiar person. Many great manuscripts were assembled around one poetic form. Others offered a cohesive subject. Some just had several fun poems.

    Thank you, thank you, thank you for participating! (And I can’t wait to see everyone in April for the 5th annual April PAD Challenge.)

    *****

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    22 Responses to 2012 November PAD Chapbook Challenge: Results

    1. dandelionwine says:

      Congratulations, Kelli and David and all on the list! Wonderful, wonderful poems!

    2. RJ Clarken says:

      Hearty congrats all around – to the winners and to the players. And thanks, Robert, for another great challenge. Sorry I didn’t get here sooner, but I’ve been sick and only just logged on. Anyway, yay!

    3. Juanita Lewison-Snyder says:

      Some great work there, ladies & gents. Congrats!

    4. Jane Shlensky says:

      Congrats to all! These were great reading, I’m sure, Robert.

    5. Richard, I don’t know how I missed that you were included as well. That is AWESOME! Congratulations!!

    6. De Jackson says:

      CONGRATULATIONS to all!
      Kelli, your work is absolutely gorgeous. I’ll be buying the book when it is available.
      David, there is such a playfulness to your words. So much fun!
      Awesome to see so many new-to-me names here, along with our beloved Laurie.

      Kudos, amazing poets.
      de

    7. Excellent choices. Such opportunity for deep reflective thinking. You all have cause to be proud! We are lucky to have you sharing your writing, and you souls, with us! THANK YOU!

    8. Congratulations to all the winners. Wow, that’s some good stuff.

      Particular shout-out to Richard Fenwick, one of the Twitter crowd – congrats on the honorable mention.

    9. Congratulations to all… and thanks, Robert.

    10. Misky says:

      Wonderful choices, Robert. Well done Kelli and David!

    11. Congratulations to all! Kelli, I love your work and hope you find a way to get this collection published. Outstanding everyone!

    12. Congratulations, Kelli and David and all the Honorable Mentions (including my special friend Laurie!) Just curious, Robert. How many entries did you have? I can’t imagine the task. Thanks for doing this. We all do better work when challenged.

    13. Kelli, your poems above blow me away. I hope you get your chapbook available for purchase, and that we are informed so we can purchase it. Outstanding choice, Robert!

      Laurie, so good to see you getting recognition! CONGRATULATIONS!

      Congratulations to all who made the list! What an accomplishment!

    14. Ah, truly an honor! [I'll take Honorable Mention] (:

      Congrats to Kelli and David! I love the poems…

      Best,
      mt

    15. Hannah says:

      Congratulations to everyone!!! These poems were a joy to read this morning, thank you Robert for all that you do to facilitate these challenges and this writing community!!

      Smiles to ALL! :)

    16. Wow! It’s easy to see why you chose to share these poems. Astounding work. Congrats to Kelli and David – and your honorable mentions.

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