Showing & Telling

Showing & Telling

Learn How to Show & When to Tell for Powerful & Balanced Writing
by Laurie Alberts
Writer’s Digest Books, 2010
ISBN: 978-1-58297-705-8
$16.99, paperback, 256 pages

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Explore how scenes create emotional connections with a reader and work to forward plot in this excerpt from chapter 1 of Showing & Telling by Laurie Alberts.

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About the Book

Write vibrant scenes and essential summaries

“Show—don’t tell.” How many times have you heard this standard bit of writing advice? It’s so common in writing courses and critiques that it has become a cliché. Writers are often told to write scenes, dramatize, cut exposition, cut summary—but it’s misguided advice. The truth is good writing almost always requires both showing and telling. The trick is finding the right balance of scene and summary—the two basic components of creative prose.

Showing and Telling shows you how to employ each of these essential techniques in the appropriate places within a narrative. You’ll learn how to:

•    write scenes and cut exposition
•    compress time and summarize background information
•    create graceful transitions
•    effectively inject interpretation
•    and more

Complete with examples from bestsellers and interactive exercises, this comprehensive guide offers an in-depth look at scene development, the role of reflection in storytelling, the art of summarizing, and how to bring it all together.

* Includes an analysis of the short story “Russia Is a Fish” by author Laurie Alberts.

About the Author
Laurie Alberts is the author of six books including three novels: The Price of Land in Shelby, Lost Daughters, and Tempting Fate. Her work has won several awards, including a James Michener Award. She teaches fiction and creative nonfiction in the MFA in Writing Program at Vermont College of Fine Arts. Her website is

Table of Contents

Section One: Making Vibrant Scenes
Chapter 1    The Purposes of Scenes       
Chapter 2    Types of Scenes       
Chapter 3    Scene Structure       
Chapter 4    Tools of the Scene Trade       
Chapter 5    The Sins of Scenes       
Scene Exercises       
Section Two: Creating Essential Summaries
Chapter 6    The Uses of Summary       
Chapter 7    Reflection       
Chapter 8    More Tools of the Summary Trade      
Chapter 9    The Sins of Summary       
Summary Exercises       
Section Three: Combining Scene and Summary
Chapter 10    Using Summary to Set Up Scenes       
Chapter 11    Inserting Summary in the Midst of Scenes       
Chapter 12    Inserting Scene in the Midst of Summary       
Chapter 13    Scene, Summary, and Pace       
Chapter 14    Following a Scene With Reflective Summary       
Chapter 15    Balancing Scene and Summary       
Chapter 16    Transitions       
Chapter 17    Beginnings and Endings       
Scene and Summary Exercises   
Appendix A (Story Sample): “Russia Is a Fish”       
Works Cited           

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