How to Write Novels About Faraway Lands

In explaining why he wrote his novels, the great writer Joseph Conrad once told his readers that it was so they could “glimpse the truth for which you have forgotten to ask.” These words no doubt resonate with many writers, but especially with those of us who choose faraway places and times for our settings, for often we are presenting realities the reader has never before imagined.


Pattison-smallSoul of the Fire Guest post by Eliot Pattison, who has been described as a “writer of faraway mysteries,” a label which is particularly apt for someone whose travel and interests span a million miles of global trekking. An international lawyer by training, he is the author of three acclaimed mystery series. His Edgar award-winning Inspector Shan series explores his deep concerns for the people of Tibet and has been translated into over twenty languages around the world. Soul of the Fire, the 8th book in the series has been selected by Publishers Weekly as one of the 20 best mysteries of 2014.  For more information, visit: www.eliotpattison.com.


It is hugely exciting to sit before the blank palette, or blank pad –yes, I still ink my first drafts in longhand—and begin to translate those unfamiliar worlds. But it is also a sober responsibility. Writing novels set among a distant people involves the same challenges as writing historical novels. Those of us who embrace those challenges not only must construct engaging storylines and characters, we must also create a world that is faithful to fact while still capturing the reader. Our audience trusts us not to mislead them about that world. In my Shan novels I have to weave together the threads of an obscure, traditional and very spiritual culture with those of a modern militaristic, often tyrannical government. If I exaggerate aspects of that world I breach that trust with my readers, so I am fastidious about keeping it real through my own experience, research and staying up to date on Tibetan affairs. My latest novel, Soul of the Fire, very much reflects events that are still breaking news. The danger of such efforts, however, is that they can overwhelm the story. There’s a fine balance here, in several dimensions. Becoming too much of a reporter turns the book into a sterile, impersonal account. Leaning too heavily on the cultural content turns it into a work of anthropology.

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Those of us who work in this milieu have to bring the reader into that foreign culture, or distant time, in gradual, subtle ways, building on convincing, and engaging, characters. To be successful I have to ease my readers into that world, let them learn about it because they want to become part of my character’s treacherous, exhilarating journey. I want them to smell the incense on the altar and hear the boots of the secret police, but most of all I want them to feel the fear, to hunger for justice in a world where it is constantly denied, and to share simple joys through eyes they had never before imagined.

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Long ago I discovered there are truths that cannot be dissected or reduced to journalistic accounts. It took much longer for me to understand that some truths are so evasive that only fiction can make them believable.

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2 thoughts on “How to Write Novels About Faraway Lands

  1. Clinton A. Seeber

    Thank you so much! I in 2012, began to write an epic fantasy novel. I have already completed the first draft of my first novel, and I have already begun on the sequel. Like you, I write all of my first drafts by hand, using pen and notebook. It is so good to find kind of a kindred soul who actually writes a brief yet helpful article and does not inanely bloviate like most of the guest article writers on this site.

  2. JanelleFila

    I have always admired writers who create new creatures and immerse readers into new worlds. I think it is the hardest writing there is because there isn’t any context for the reader. Everything has to be explained. As I’ve learned over the years, I am not nearly as effective at communicating as I think that I am, so I can totally see myself missing a few key elements of world building that might leave a reader scratching his head. Janelle http://www.janellefila.com

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