Newbie to WD & to writing

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    lacymarie
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    Hi! I’m a lifelong lover of books and have recently caught the writing bug. I’m hoping to bounce some ideas off of you all and give my humble opinions if I can help anyone else.

    Still trying to figure out how all these forums work, so this may be misplaced in this Introductions section. But I am looking for critiques of the hook of a young adult novel I’m working on:

    “In rural West Virginia, 17 year-old Ariel struggles with the loss of her parents while evil forces battle for her soul and a brooding winged stranger claims her heart.”

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    AngelinaK52
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    Welcome to the forums.

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