Left Alone (Trigger Warning)

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  • #656869

    Rob Vargas
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    Curious what you think of this:

    So sleepy…

    I need new diapee, Mommy.

    Mommy?

    I’ll just take a nap.

    Daddy will come back.

    Mommy, Daddy, they always come.

    I love you, Mommy.

    Where are you?

    I love you, Daddy.

    It was fun going in the car with you.

    Why did you walk away?

    So hot.

    So hot…

  • #657149

    Viking
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    Yeah, I think it works.

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