Is this an effective book blurb for a middle-grade novel?

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    Is this book blurb for a middle-grade novel effective enough to hook you?

    “Eight-year-old Zack has 30 days flip the old shed into a clubhouse in his new back yard before it gets torn down, but once he opens it, he discovers something inside that he must keep a secret, but what will he do when the thirty days are up?”

    Your thoughts or suggestions would be greatly appreciated 🙂

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