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Dear Agent:

I am submitting to you because of your interest in thrillers.

Despite spending every Sunday in church as a child listening his grandfather’s sermons, thirty years later Kory is not a religious man. He does consider himself a spiritual person with respect for life until one quiet afternoon changes him: After wounding a drug-crazed intruder holding a gun to his son’s head, he knows there must be something very wrong with his soul when he shoots the man once more for fun. His need to kill again takes him to Wytherton, a quiet village nestled in the English countryside, where death waits with hungers of its own. Unknown to him, one of the residents has taken a vow to kill him the day he arrives.

TIME FOR REVENGE, a completed thriller of 81,000 words, is my second novel.