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LaylaMarie
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-Dedicated 2 my muffin

I CANT HUG A FRIEND,
2 SAY EVERYTHINGS OK.
I CANT MAKE A FRIEND SMILE,
BY SAYING ‘UR BEAUTIFUL’.
I CANT C A FRIEND LAUGH,
CUZ I EMBARASSED MYSELF.
I CANT LAUGH WITH A FRIEND,
WHEN SHE GETS EMBARASSED.
I CANT PROTECT A FRIEND,
WHEN SHE IS SCARED.
I CANT TRUST A FRIEND,
WITH THESE SECRETS THAT I KEEP.
I CANT HOLD A FRIEND,
‘JUST BECAUSE’.
I CANT STARE AT A FRIEND,
CUZ HER EYES AND SMILE R SO MESMERIZING.
I CANT MAKE A FRIEND HAPPYM
WHEN I WANT HER 2 HAVE,
A HEAVEN ON EARTH…

Any and all critique is welcomed….thanks – salag