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jrtomlin,

 

 Just goes to show that the best we can do is guess. That’s a good percentage so your query is working well. I pretty much agree with PearlCrescent, but I might would hesitate to change it if it’s working that well. While it’s not what agents TELL you to do, I’d say the interesting aspects are overshadowing any shortcomings.

Good luck!

Thank you for your comments. To update what I posted earlier, I sent a pdf of the ms to two agents this afternoon.

LT

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