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ljb1947
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Lord Terpsichorean – 2008-11-13 3:24 PM

PearlCrescent,

Thank you for your thoughtful comments and suggestion. And of course, I address all correspondence to a particular person.

I must admit that I have sent this letter to twenty agents. So far, seven have asked to see my synopsis. Perhaps giving just enough engenders interest as well.

LT

http://YorkVanNixonIII.com

Just goes to show that the best we can do is guess. That’s a good percentage so your query is working well. I pretty much agree with PearlCrescent, but I might would hesitate to change it if it’s working that well. While it’s not what agents TELL you to do, I’d say the interesting aspects are overshadowing any shortcomings.

Good luck!

And nice to see you posting, PearlCrescent. You’ve been missed.