Re: Re: Winter Time

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Bruce
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Tim,
I’m sorry, I’m not getting the problem. Mist ends with the ‘ist’ sound and dismissed ends with the ‘ist’ sound? Please explain: mist and dismissed do not rhyme. (The only difference I see is that mist has one syllable and dismissed two)

Thanks,
Elizabeth