Re: Re: Winter Time

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Angela Roquet
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G-girl, I really like this, quite pleasant. Perhaps you should have continued the same rhyme scheme in 2 and 6, but those are the ones I like the best. Um, they do rhyme, just not where you expect them to. That’s the mumbo jumbo I’m sticking with.