Re: Re: Winter Time

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jayrbee777
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I think its beautiful G-girl. There is a peace and solace and wistfulness in a winter snowfall and you’ve captured it beautifully. I agree with Perior on the 2nd stanza needing a rhyme — but I think the 6th stanza is perfect as written. Thank you!