Re: Re: Winter Time

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kimberley
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G-Girl – 2008-11-13 2:24 AM

Perior – 2008-11-12 8:43 PM

Do I feel a twisting of the wrist 
or is this something to be dismissed
Ah, then why is my eye teared with mist
 
 

Excellent my good man!

In reply:

Don’t leave me here twisting in the wind
I didn’t rhyme, I know that I have sinned
I promise in the future to repent
And take to heart the message you have sent
So wipe those misty tears out of your eyes
The snow is gone, we’re back under blue skies
I promise too I will not twist your wrist
As Wings would say, “People, case dismissed!”

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