Re: Re: Wide Awake

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Bruce
Participant

Lisa,
I’ve read this a few times and it is painful. You have managed
to convey such depth of emotion. The last two lines of Stanza 3
are my favorites because they are relatable to so many other
folks everyday situations, and the hopelessness of being stuck.

Well done,
Elizabeth
((((Hugs))))