Re: Re: Wide Awake

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megamillions
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Hi Fred,
Thank you so much.
I have been feeling a lot of this pain again. It is so hard to write about it and NOT feel it.
This is not the only one written like this. I have more. sheesh!

The last stanza is my best, I think. It portrays exactly how I feel right now…The monster is awake. 🙁
Thanks Fred. You interpret me very well.

There is so much to learn about poetry. I never want to stop learning.

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