Re: Re: Wide Awake

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AKnursewriter
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Lisa,
Without knowing the details of your poem, I caught the gist of it. I remember you had said something before about writing a book.
I caught the trepidation in your poem of approaching the writing of something you would have preferred not to revisit.
I thought the last stanza was fantastic. I pictured a mythical monster awakening from its slumber.
Good job….again.