Re: RE: WHEN MOTHERS PRAY

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barb schmeling
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TexasPoet – 2009-03-23 2:34 PM A great and sentimental poem, Angel. Good job. I won’t repeat the critiques the others have given. As an experiment you might move from the specific to the general. Perhaps talk about how…in general……the prayers of mothers hold the universe together. More on the philosophical level. Tp

Thanks Terry, I’ll think about that and see what I can come up with. Thanks again for the read.

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