Re: RE: WHEN MOTHERS PRAY

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sukecal
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A great and sentimental poem, Angel.

Good job.

I won’t repeat the critiques the others have given.

As an experiment you might move from the specific to the general.

Perhaps talk about how…in general……the prayers of mothers hold the universe together.

More on the philosophical level.

Tp