abqwriter – 2006-08-01 8:03 PM
Pat Pechon – 2006-08-01 4:53 PM
Karen…I think you did a great job. I would think with only four hundred words it’s tough. But, you did a nice transition from the people you interveiwed, to the information on the changing of ownership, and the schedule information. I didn’t see any grammer no-no’s, but don’t go by me, I live by the grammer checker. Norwich…Right outside the back gate of the sub base in Groton.
Aaahh… that is because you haven’t purchased the magic grammar wand. I waved it over her piece and found not one, but two grammatical errors. She did a great job, though – think we’re going to have to pitch in a buy her a reporter’s notebook!
OMG, Lisa – you should have seen the notebook I used – lucky for me I cwas able to fold the cover back so no one could see the pretty little dragonflies…maybe a reporter’s notebook with my first paycheck?!