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barb schmeling

BrandiG – 2009-03-26 4:40 PM It reminds me of a part two version of the song “Walk-away Joe”. Change Johnny’s name to Joe and you could have “Walk-away Joe part 2”. 🙂 The first stanza was great. It reminded me of William Carlos Williams’s “The Red Wheelbarrow” in its descriptive simplicity. (I LOVE Williams, by the way!)

Thanks Brandi, for your comment but I never heard the song “Walk-away-Joe or the Red

Wheelbarrow. Liz sent me a link to the poet that wrote Red Wheelbarrow and I read his poem, I wanted thank you for conparing my humble work to such a great poet. You are too kind. 🙂