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bigiq
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I’m not a big fan of “text message speak,” so I would like to see this in a form that would match the sweetness of the expressions. I’m sure someone else will defend this form as valid so understand that this is just my own preference. Even with this bias, I found it quite readable and enjoyable. Welcome to the forum–I look forward to many more posts from you.