Re: Re: Unmasked You Are

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sreicher
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this sounds like a sad unmasking, almost a roast but not as funny

these qualities youve decribed very well, and i love the rhyme, these lines seem long but the wording makes them slip out like silk, i was not detracted from reading at all

i really liked it