Re: RE: Time

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megamillions
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Hi Angel,
I had no time to post to this earlier.
I am back 🙂

“Time remains the same
twenty-four hours a day
it’s what I have done with my time
that’s made me weaker today,”

This stanza says so much for so many. We are so responsible for what we do with our short time here, aren’t we? If only we knew how much we would value time later…while we were abusing it earlier. I am guilty of it also, dear Angel.

I will come back to this one.
good job. 🙂