Michael J. Bugeja
Thanks J.R. and Jai,
I had left only one word in for one character. I didn’t even think about it being offensive, Jai. Thank you for letting me know about that. I will put back in the gonnas and contractions, but leave out the brogue. The professor did suggest that certain ways to write the flow of a sentence can create the illusion of a brogue in writing. He had us read a couple of examples. It was very interesting.
Jai lol. I really didn’t mean to make the professor sound like an ogre. He was very nice and had many other good points. I think he missed the mark on this one, though.
Thank you again!