Re: Re: The Trash Collector

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This is an amazing story, but the sentence structure often feels awkward. I didn’t notice the word repetition, but I can give you a tip – copy and paste your work into the form on It also estimates your keyword density, and this makes a great tool to discover crazy words you don’t realize you overuse. Apparently, I use just and look a ridiculous amount. lol