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mmadonna1
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Distinctive, enjoyable, vivid and immediate, nice narrative progression, an intelligent voice.

Those who panic at–gasp!–“repetition” might want to familiarize themselves with classic rhetorical and literary techniques.

For a start:

http://rhetoric.byu.edu/figures/groupings/of%20repetition.htm

Sometimes on critique forums, one finds that the level of critique does not match the level of the writing.