Re: Re: The Trash Collector

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No time for more than this…
It’s not bad although there are problems with sentence structure here and there, punctuation including overused/misused
semi-colons and ellipses while I found word repetition annoying and, 4th paragraph, “between my mother and I/me.” Also
the last paragraph could use some work.
Good luck.