Re: RE: The Pearl Keepers

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Faerie_spark
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Well, that’s two people, so I’m changing the ending to “not all have pearl in tow.”

Thanks for the commentary on this one.  It is part of my Oceans Alive series(poems and short stories).

Where eagles fly,

Don