Re: RE: The Pearl Keepers

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Voskamp
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Hey Don

You caught me off guard with THAR SHE BLOWS.

Your first stanza was soft and filled with loving thoughts, but perhaps it’s me, I just didn’t get the last part.  When I think of ‘Thar she blows, I think of pirates on the wild bounty or of whaler’s about to spear their prey.  Which is it?  Or, what did I miss?

Lillies    Carol