Re: RE: The Pearl Keepers

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Faerie_spark
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Hi Liz,

Thanks for the comments.  I did change the line that was singular – thanks.  As a kid who spent lots of days fishing and searching for clams(Hundreds of them), I would watch for the bubbles under water to clue me as to their whereabouts.  Much of our writing comes from experiences we have that we can share or adapt for other uses in our stories or poems.  My wife’s favorite line was the ‘thar she blows’ at rhe very end.

A writer friend,

Don