Re: RE: Tasting the Memories

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megamillions
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Welcome to the forum!

The imagery is vivd, and I sort of wished I finished eating my yogurt before I read it. 😮

I have to think about this one. You have skills, no doubt about that. 🙂

This is a great place to share your writing, and I hope you settle in and get comfortable with us.

I saw no cliche here.
You will get more feedback. Don’t be nervous, we don’t bite…just nibble a little.
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