Re: Re: Sweating the Blues

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thanks…! Will do.. So it isn’t stupid? Creativity is kind of tricky.. It can either sound really profound or really bad.. and I put myself out on the line with this one.. Actually, this is how it all started.. I was driving down the street and subconsciously stopped at a misplaced stop sign (it was in a construction zone). I decided that I didn’t need to stop.. Next thing I know I was contemplating how the brain subconsciously responds to subliminal cues.. This turned into the… above.. I added in elements of absurdity, surrealism and came up with this… An age old theme – that of alienation – but versed with the symbols of today..