Re: RE: Sweating the Blues

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megamillions
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Hi Nordin,
If you read this fast with some New York attitude, you have a rap song. 🙂
It is pretty cool, but I noticed immediately you have to correct “hypnotic”

I have to come back and read this one some more later. :emoticon:
I like it.