Re: Re: Song of the Tone-Deaf

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Sorry to Kevin. And thanks for the welcome Elizabeth.

Neither. I wanted more of a metaphor; instead of having, or growing up with dreams, I “grew” them myself. I wanted to make them seem alive.

To demonstrate:

I grew dreams of bridges built, [more specifically] of skin colors crumbling like concrete walls.