Hi Constantine, welcome to the poetry forum:)
Eh, that’s Kevin up there:)
first let me say that I’m just the Moderator, not a skillful poet.
That said, I have a question. In your first line do we read it as:
I grew up with dreams of, bridges being built and
of skin colors crumbling like concrete walls? (two dreams/hopes)
I ‘built-up’ dreams of bridges being built and
skin colors crumbling like concrete walls?
I guess the word ‘grew’ is kinda throwing me.