Re: Re: Song of the Tone-Deaf

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Mary Jo
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Overall I think you have a really good piece here. I do have a problem in understanding the last two stanzas, but that’s probably just me. You have a good flow and the rythm seems quit natural. Thanks for sharing and welcome.