Welcome Stephanie, greate website you have. Did you create it? Is it for other writers, or only for those talented enough to use dynamic emoticons? 🙂
I particularly liked the line of bobbing yellow heads, reminded me of the singing slugs in Flushed Away.
Come on up to the Writer’s Block for writing-related gossip, down to Take It Outside for everything else, and when you want to display some of your work for critiques, jump into the forums. Remember, to take everything with a grain of paprika, we’re just giving our opinions of your work and some of us would probably bitch about King’s “I have a dream…” and Kennedy’s “Ask not what your country can do for you…” speechs.
Note that I used two ellipses.