Re: Re: SOLE SURVIVOR

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jayrbee777
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Such a sad, dark tale, NorEaster — very painful and tragic. You’ve worked so much detail and back-story into it, that I’m not sure if it is a long poem — or an abbreviated short story. Some excellent things in here though — the description of the relationship with wife, his vacillation & meandering thoughts — some very good stuff, and very sad.