Re: Re: Sol-tan

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Angela Roquet
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Okay Amy, I took your advice and changed that line…I like it mmmuch better, thank you

Hi Pam. It’s photons:The smallest units of light that have both wave and particle properties. Good question, that winds line- I was thinking of winding a turban around a head when I wrote that, but the line works as a noun also. Turban interpreted as turbine lends itself to a winding like a clock.